英语2022年中考英语满分作文赏析征稿作文

2022年全国中考英语满分作文赏析

15 征稿作文

NO.1

（2022·广东广州·中考真题）你校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计（design）的绿色图书馆。

注意：

1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；

2.词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；

3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

My Green School Library

I want to design a green school library.

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【满分作文赏析】

My Green School Library

I want to design a green school library. It is green. It is built entirely from renewable resources. It is round. When you sit inside, you will feel very warm. It is composed of waste paper and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun. You can read all kinds of books in it. You can also listen to music in it. If you are tired, you can also rest inside.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文主要以“My Green School Library”为题，并根据题干中的思维导图介绍你所设计的绿色图书馆，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。主要是根据思维导图中的提示描述自己设计的绿色图书馆，写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.2

（2022·湖北宜昌·中考真题）假如你学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“I love ________”为主题征稿，请你投稿。

稿件内容：

◆热爱的主题

◆热爱的理由

◆适当的感悟

稿件要求：

（1）请补全标题；

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

（3）词数80词左右。

I love ________

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【满分作文赏析】

I love reading

I love reading very much. I remember it was five years ago that I became interested in reading. At that time, I joined a reading club online. I was glad to find there were so many books for me to read. My teacher encouraged me to read different kinds of books, and then share my feelings with other readers. I found great fun sharing ideas. Ever since then, reading has been my favorite hobby.

From reading books, I can not only learn a lot from them, but also open a new world for me. It makes me relaxed and brings me a lot of fun. I think more and more people will love reading in the future.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我喜欢阅读”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段先引出自己喜爱的事情，接着描述自己喜爱它的原因和经历；第二段描述自己从中得到的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

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